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يکشنبه 6/11/1387 - 13:25 -0 تشکر 84860
Loans and Installments (LAI)

Loans and Installments :

Nowadays almost in all countries banks pay some money to people with some reliable warrantors in order to take circuit to their money that come from their capitalists that include people’s money and give it to someone that need it and instead of that every month receive certain amounts of their money that called installment. Thanks to the decreasing rate of money per days banks need to determine amount of money as profit and it include profit of capitalist , bank’s profit that include the salary of bank’s employees and also amount of money that have to transfer to fund of currency saving to pay as help of governments ( Yaraneh ) to people . these were the money’s cycle in almost all countries . but there is a weird and unlawful cycle that called lucre.Do anyone know what ‘s the meaning of this word? If anyone know , he/she would have to explain it in his/her ability. Yes your right! This the main subject of this topic is the lucre.I would be pleased if anyone correct me in all aspects from lexical and grammatical problems or help me to recognize right form of these cycles.MasOud RaD

PATH OF SUCCESS: TO REACH TO A BRIGHT FUTURE YOU HAVE TO TAKE YOUR WORKS SERIOUSLY AND ONLY CONSENTRATE ON BRIGHT SIDES OF ALL SUBJECTS ALSO YOU HAVE TO DETERMINE YOUR GOALS & START AS SOON AS POSSIBLE  .

چهارشنبه 9/11/1387 - 11:9 - 0 تشکر 85597

Hi my dear friends!!!!!!!

Dont anyone know what the lucre is?

Dont you have any idea?

I need your coopration in order to take a direction to this and other topics so help me.

MasOud RaD

PATH OF SUCCESS: TO REACH TO A BRIGHT FUTURE YOU HAVE TO TAKE YOUR WORKS SERIOUSLY AND ONLY CONSENTRATE ON BRIGHT SIDES OF ALL SUBJECTS ALSO YOU HAVE TO DETERMINE YOUR GOALS & START AS SOON AS POSSIBLE  .

يکشنبه 27/11/1387 - 5:16 - 0 تشکر 90712

Hi!
Well... I would say, lots of Ands & Thats, with all those long, complicated, not-always-grammatically-right sentences, apparently ruins the reader"s reading experience, which is supposed to be a pleasurable one -not, say, sort of intellectually chaotic ego-struggle!
... While this is not sth to be seriously worried about, as respecting gettable structures is far easier, to a man of your tastes"n"talents, than memorizing thousands of thousands of words & expressions -a great load of which already taken care of ...Proudly by [Capital] Uuuuuuuuu!
All guys out there do know by now that, It is NOT ME who dared to give it a go ... I mean the LAI; [the Article] So, you may cool down when getting to know that this is just some words of help from me, a [small] u -just like U.
Well ....; Let"s see ...[Good effects on your self-confidence ... no?! Hahaha!, Now, ... I"m tired of the Masterpiece -A difficult-to-bring-together one ... I"ve got all the energy from no one but you all, I"m so greatful ... you"re so kind!
C"mon guys! Let"s move on ... 
Nowadays, almost in all countries, banks pay some money to people with some { isn"t it better now?! Just get rid of it!} reliable warrantors in order to take circuit to their money that comes from coming from their capitalists that include people’s money and give it to someone in need of it {rather than that need it }and instead of that in return, every month recieve ask them to return certain amounts of their money part of it each month on a set schedule that is called , so called, by installment. Thanks to the decreasing rate of  the money being returned per days, banks need to determine allocate amount some part of the money it as something known to be their profit{No way!} interest, and it includes including {On top of, I"d suggest;} the profit of the capitalist(s)as well as bank’s profit that include the amount dedicated in order to take care of the salary of {how about for? the bank’s {Hey! No "apostrophe s" is needed!} employees clerks {well...}and also amount of money all that have has {"money" was uncountable those lovely days!} to transfer be transferred {Passive, that is; Any way, I"d rather to be put aside;}to fund of currency saving regarding kind of "fund-saving" policy to pay be paid {to be used; What do you say?} as help a helpful hand to peaple of governments by the government( Yaraneh ){ What is it called in English?} to people . these were{Isn"t "It was" better or something?} the money’s { No " "s ";}cycle in almost all countries . but there is a weird and unlawful cycle ,(that is) called "lucre".Does anyone know what ‘s the meaning of this word what the meaning of this word is {"Is there anyone knowing (=who may know) what exactly it means?",were I in your shoes;(too formal, agree?!(were I...))} If anyone knows {or, "If  so,"}  he/she wouldhave to{Really?!!,well... I say  Yes;} please explain it {Better say,"can you explain it a little?"}, in his/her ability as far/much as you can. Yes [your right!]{Should be "you"re"; It is your Chatting Style, I see; Yet a wrong one!} This The main subject of this topic is the "lucre".
I guess that"s all. Please note that all crossed-out phrasas are not necessarily wrong; Some  just represent my taste.
Don"t forget your Time2Practice
&... People Over The Seas say a Filthy(that is, gained dishonorably;) Lucre is a shame. But in my opinion, Lucre, as far as you mean it Interest, is no way something fair at all. It is not even legal; Provided that you don"t consider crimes as the basis of your Mother Rules.
So ... 

يکشنبه 27/11/1387 - 5:58 - 0 تشکر 90713

Hi back!
This is the full version of the paragraph, edited and restated; Now clean, & I hope a little bit more understandable... well, for a native English speaker... & writer; It was my aim, to provide you with a passage giving somewhat a  better feeling while reading masoud_rad article,LAI... & for you, who try to learn English, as it"s really been spoken out there so far.
 Nowadays, almost  in all countries,, banks pay some money to people with reliable warrantors in order to take circuit to their money  coming from their capitalists that include people’s money and give it to someone in need of it, and in return, ask them to repay part of it back (?)each month on a set schedule, so called, by Installment. Thanks to the decreasing rate of  the money being returned per day, banks need to allocate some part of it as something, known to be their Interest, on top of the profit of the capitalist(s)as well as the amount dedicated in order to take care of the salary of {how about for? } the bank clerks and also, all that has to be put aside, regarding kind of "fund-saving" policy to be used as a helpful hand to peaple by the government( Yaraneh ){ What is it called in English?}. This is the money cycle almost in all countries . But there is a weird and unlawful cycle, called "Lucre". Is there anyone knowing what exactly it means? If Yes, is it  possible for you to explain more?
Yes, yoouuuu"re rrrriiiight! "Lucre"; This is the main topic of our discussion-to-be(!) down here. 

سه شنبه 29/11/1387 - 18:25 - 0 تشکر 91344

IN THE NAME OF GOD

   Special hi and thanks to Mr/Ms.Enchanted__Edelweiss
I am really greatful to be friend and %100 your student!!!!

   You are the best and I expect other people to take part in and correct me as well as you done!!!!!

I would be please if anyone could correct me inorder to improve my english.

   Excuse me dear Enchanted__Edelweiss but is it possible for you to introduce yourself to me. I mean what want to know how long you have been studying English, How old you are, where you have learnt it, and at all , tell me every thing that you may think is possible to say.

   I would be satisfy if you could set a topic instead of mine (تازه واردان و نوآموزان انگلیسی) to teach me and other.

ThaNk YoU sO MucH

MasOud RaD

PATH OF SUCCESS: TO REACH TO A BRIGHT FUTURE YOU HAVE TO TAKE YOUR WORKS SERIOUSLY AND ONLY CONSENTRATE ON BRIGHT SIDES OF ALL SUBJECTS ALSO YOU HAVE TO DETERMINE YOUR GOALS & START AS SOON AS POSSIBLE  .

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